Review for "Quantitative super-resolution single molecule microscopy dataset of YFP-tagged growth factor receptors"

Completed on 23 May 2018 by Graham Wright. Sourced from :

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The authors present four superresolution single molecule localisation microscopy (SMLM) datasets utilising YFP (specifically mCitrine) tagged erbB3 in A431 cells -a welcome addition to the literature and suitable for Giga Science. mCitrine is a challenging fluorophore for SMLM and hence such datasets provide a good testing ground for the continuing development of SMLM algorithms. The paper should be acceptable for publication in Giga Science with some minor corrections/revisions/suggestions as outlined here:

1) Can the authors comment on where mCitrine sits, relative to other fluorescent proteins, in terms of an appropriate choice for the purpose of SMLM? What parameters should be considered?

2) In the 'Context' section (paragraph from Line 56), can the authors expand on why A431 cells and erbB3 were used and what their biological significance is? Why might superresolution be a useful approach for studying erbB3 -what extra information can be gained from such approaches when compared to diffraction limited techniques and can we see this in the images presented?

3) The authors should state what pH of MEA sample buffer was used? This has been shown to be of critical importance for blinking of probes. Has this been optimized in the current experiment, or reported elsewhere?

4) Is the image acquisition widefield fluorescence or TIRF? If widefield (as the objective lens suggests) how is the out of focus light dealt with by the ThunderSTORM/SOFI algorithms.

5) Relating to Line 98 and Table 3 -can the authors comment on whether the 'photoelectrons per A/D count' vary with exposure or EM gain on this detector?

6) Use of zoomed insets within the images in the figures would help the reader to better see the impact the superresolution has.

7) Can the authors explain the source of the variety in numbers for each of the 10 molecules featured in Table 1, for the non-specialist reader (e.g. the localization uncertainly varies between 14.60 and 29.85 -why)?

8) Fig 3B -the red dots are difficult to discern in the compressed version available to the reviewers.

9) The authors should explain what is meant by 2nd, 3rd, 4th order of SOFI (e.g. Line 176 and Fig 5).

10) Do the density maps (Fig. 1D cf. Fig. 5D) use the same colour scaling (the compression on

Fig. 5 obscures the scale/numbers) -can the authors comment on the significance of the regions of high density erbB3?

11) Can the authors comment on how many frames they recommend to accurately reconstruct an image of a sample such as this, given the differences seen between datasets in Table 2?

Why do we see such differences in density of detections per frame between YFP data 1 and YFP data 3, what was done differently (similar number of detections, but 10,000 frames and 1,419 frames respectively)? Are the outcomes comparable?

Minor comments

12) Line 20: for the non-specialist reader, I suggest giving a value for the 'classic limit in optical microscopes'

13) Line 42: I suggest displaying the equation for lateral resolution as an equation rather than in the text.

14) Line 153: Typo "Fig. 4D" should be 1D?

15) Tables 2 & 3 could be combined and should be referred to from the "Single molecule microscopy" section, beginning Line 80